Thursday, June 4, 2020

Lockdown writing 

We were learning about Our peoples lockdown 
I found it easy to To think of my lockdown 
I found it hard to To write it all
I really enjoyed Writing my lockdown life and doing backround.
Next time I need to To add more describing.

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 10, 2020 at 1:35 PM

    Hi Isabelle,
    I think you did a really good job at making your poem stand out and easy to read. Your poem flowed nicely and I think you did a really good job.
    From Perle

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    1. AnonymousJuly 30, 2020 at 10:32 AM

      Thanks for the nice compliments. Do I need to fix anything up.

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  2. ZacJune 18, 2020 at 12:33 PM

    Kia ora. My name is Zac and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I also agree with you perle this is a really clear piece of writing and well written.Maybe next time add some more writing at the top.

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    1. AnonymousJuly 30, 2020 at 10:34 AM

      Thanks for the compliments and the feedback

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